The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.
The table and charts illustrate the total amount of the police budget and where the money was spent compared between 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain.
Overall
, it can be seen that the total budget in 2017 was higher than in 2018, Linking Words
additionally
, the police station distributed major of Linking Words
money
in salaries followed by accommodations transport, and technology, respectively.
Correct article usage
the money
According to
where the money came from, the highest income was from Linking Words
National
government with 175.5 million in 2017, the second place was local taxes accounting for 91.2 million and the other sources Correct article usage
the National
was
around 38 million, interestingly, the police income in 2018 Correct subject-verb agreement
were
following
the same pattern.
Wrong verb form
followed
Furthermore
, the proportion of expenditure in 2017 and 2018 had the same trend, in which salaries for officers and staff were the greatest among the others Linking Words
while
technology was the least. Linking Words
However
, salaries Linking Words
was
decreased from 75% to 69%, Change the verb form
were
while
technology was increased from 8% to 14% in 2018.Linking Words
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