The graphs show changes in spending habits of people in UK between 1971 and 2001. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.

The graphs show changes in spending habits of people in UK between 1971 and 2001. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.
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The two pie charts give information about the comparison of how people spent their money in seven different categories in the UK in the years 1971 and 2001.
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, it can be clearly seen that at the beginning of the period, the largest expenditure was made
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food, whilst computers made up the smallest of the total spending.
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at the end
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of the period, cars made up the highest percentage,
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the book became the lowest spending segment. The food sector accounted for 44% of the UK’s spending in 1971
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and experienced a significant decrease by almost one-third in 2001.
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, the expenditure on Books was 6% in 1971 and had a dramatic fall to 1% in 2001. At the beginning of the period, Petrol and furniture constituted 10% and 9% of the UK’s spending, respectively and these figures declined to the same value at 8%.
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, Cars comprised almost a quarter of the UK’s spending in 1971 and increased rapidly to 43% in 2001. The expenditure from restaurants was 7% In 1971 and saw a double in 2001.
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, computers stood at exactly 2% in 1971 and grew considerably by 10% in 2001.
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