The diagram below illustrates the life cycle of a frog.

The diagram below illustrates the life cycle of a frog.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below illustrates the life cycle of a frog.
Given is a diagram
illustrates
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a frog’s life cycle.
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, the 6 step cycle begins with bullfrog’s eggs which are laid in water and ends with the mating of adult tadpoles.
This
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is achieved by developing eggs and by the appearance of limbs. The process starts with the spawning of
frogs
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in the water which
then
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develop and small tadpoles emerge. These tadpoles have small bodies and tails
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that stage. Afterwards, their tail grows and they have back legs. At step 4, batrachians improve into young
frogs
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when they still have a tail but
smaller
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are smaller
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than before , and
moveover
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moreover
young ones have front legs.
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they turn into mature
frogs
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and apply a special
coloring
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colouring
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. Following these, adult
frogs
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mate,
hence
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this
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process continues.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words frogs with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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