The diagram illustrates how recycled paper is made. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The illustration describes the process of recycling

paper

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this

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is a man-made cyclical process which includes 4 steps. It starts from

paper

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that has been used and ends with rolls of recycled

paper

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To begin

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, in the making

pulp

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stage, the used

paper

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is sorted neatly and transported by a conveyor belt and it is dipped into a large

water

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tank which is full of

water

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and chemicals.

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that

paper

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turns into

pulp

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before being filtered by a machine,

this

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stage helps

in removing

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remove

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dirt.

Next,

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the filtered

pulp

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is cleaned in another tank

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with

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water

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and soap with the support of an air pump, by rinsing

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pulp

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the pulp

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, the ink will be erased immediately. Eventually, the clean

pulp

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will be dried in heated rollers to squeeze out and pour the

water

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away. After being dried, recycled

paper

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is ready for use once again.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words paper, pulp, water with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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5
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3
Grammar mistakes
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<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

145 words

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