The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the sequence of produced

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from

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cans. As an initial overview, we can see that, the process

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via seven steps only. A more detailed look at the diagram reveals that the procedure began with planting the

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canes, and that,

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canes require 12 to 18 months to grow up. Thereby you should cut the

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cane,

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this

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step of harvesting proceeds with special equipment or, traditional method by hand.

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, the cutting

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canes are crushed and converted to

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by a crushing device.

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, start to refine the

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with a limestone filter. After purifying the

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,

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transforms into syrup cross the evaporator step, by boiling the

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juice

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in a special can.

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, the centrifuge separates

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crystals from syrup, so

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,

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disposed

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the syrup

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, you need just the crystal

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for the next step.

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,

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the crystal

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and

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it

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to become suitable for utilizing