You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the amount of money given to developing countries from five organisations from 2008 to 2011. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.
The bar graph illustrates the amount of money given from five companies to developing nations from 2008 to 2011. Units are measured in billions.
Overall
,as we can see from the statistics organisations recorded the highest amount of money in 2010 and 2011. While
the organisation4 was lest.
the first
company
bought over 0.5 billion
in 2008. Otherwise
, they bought around 1 billion
in the next year
,and then
they back to the same amount of money as the first
year
.Unlike the first
company
, company
2 gave around 1.25 billion
in the first
year
, but after that, the figure rose significantly in the next 24 months and reached 2.5 billion
.Likewise
the second company
, Organisation3 gave 1.5 billion
in the first
year
before it increased to around 1.75 billion
in 2009 ,then
it fell to just below 1.4 and went up to 1.5 in the last
of the period.Organisation 4 started at 0.75 in 2008 ,then
it fell to 0.4, and after that it was almost unchanged. the last
company
gave 1.3 in 2008 before it dropped rapidly in the next 3 years and reached 0.4 billion
in 2011.Submitted by dihme on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words first, company, billion, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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