The bar chart below shows the number of people who visited different museums in London during different months in 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The bar chart below shows the number of people who visited different museums in London during different months in 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The chart compares the
number
of individuals who visited museums in London City at the variance of months in 2015 .
Overall
, It is clearly seen that the National
Museum
had the least
number
of
visitors
during the year .
While
the biggest increase was observed in accordance with The British
Museum
. the figure of individuals rose to around 400.000 in June except for National museums with roughly 200.000
visitors
. The figures remained approximately the same in July.
Then
a massive increase in numbers was seen in August with the highest
number
for the British
Museum
to around 700.000 which is the highest among the whole year followed by the History
Museum
with 600.000
visitors
. gradual fall in numbers occurred in the next months except for the science
museum
figure that grew to 500.000 in September. December held the lowest
number
of
visitors
for all museums
however
, the national
museum
number
dropped gradually to just under 500.000 .
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