The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Smmarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The first

map

depicts the current Norbition industrial area. The second

map

illustrates the future development in

this

region.

Overall

, after redevelopment, the Norbition industrial area will be reconstructed significantly, especially in certain public facilities and the location of residences.

Furthermore

, the structure of the

road

will

also

show some change.

Initially

, the contemporary Norbition industrial area contained seven houses, which were around the

road

, a town in the west, a river, and farmland in the north.

In addition

this

road

represents a ring structure in the centre of

this

map

, presenting a line structure in the south. Looking at the below

map

in detail, after a reconstruction, these residences will be located average in

this

map

Subsequently

, the

road

will be modelled into a main ring and a small ring and increased three corridors,

then

one of them will be extended to the new playground and new school.

In addition

, the new shops and the new medical centre will be built around the main ring

road

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The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Smmarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

In many countries, the number of animals and plant declining? Why do you think this is happening? How can this issue be solved

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Many criminals re-offend after they have been punished. Why do some people continue to commit crimes after they have been punished, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

In the past, knowledge was stored in books. Today, people stored knowledge on the internet.

Some people believe that teenager should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time . This can be benefit teenagers and the community as well . To what extent do you agree or disagree?