The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Smmarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

Smmarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The first
map
depicts the current Norbition industrial area. The second
map
illustrates the future development in
this
region.
Overall
, after redevelopment, the Norbition industrial area will be reconstructed significantly, especially in certain public facilities and the location of residences.
Furthermore
, the structure of the
road
will
also
show some change.
Initially
, the contemporary Norbition industrial area contained seven houses, which were around the
road
, a town in the west, a river, and farmland in the north.
In addition
,
this
road
represents a ring structure in the centre of
this
map
, presenting a line structure in the south. Looking at the below
map
in detail, after a reconstruction, these residences will be located average in
this
map
.
Subsequently
, the
road
will be modelled into a main ring and a small ring and increased three corridors,
then
one of them will be extended to the new playground and new school.
In addition
, the new shops and the new medical centre will be built around the main ring
road
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in addition".
Vocabulary: Replace the words map, road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • future development
  • site plans
  • current layout
  • proposed changes
  • residential development
  • infrastructure
  • land use
  • community impact
  • commercial buildings
  • green spaces
  • transport links
  • amenities
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