The charts below show the protein and calorie intakes of people in different parts of the world. Compare and contrast.
The given diagrams illustrate the average
protein
and calorie intake
of people from four different areas in the world.
Overall
, the first chart
shows the comparison of animal protein
and other proteins in four regions. According to
the chart
, people prefer animal protein
to other proteins. Besides
, the second chart
displays the average calorie.
Looking at the first chart
, India has the lowest protein
intake
with just only 30%. East Africa experiences a similar to India with just over 30% protein
intake
, nearly 40% less than the required consumption. Latin America
consumes approximately 45%. The highest proportion in the chart
belongs to North America
with 80% of protein
, 10% higher than the ideal protein
intake
.
According to
the chart
, India consumes 2000 calories
, about 400 calories
less than East Africa. North America
is the only area that intakes more calories
than the ideal intake
, 500 calories
more than Latin America
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