The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summrise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. 

Summrise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the procedures involved in the production of Ethanol,
also
considered as a Biofuel.
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, six major steps are followed in the production, initiated by harvesting the grown plants and
tress
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trees
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and
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processing various organisms and substances using the machinery and
to manufacture
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Ethanol for
the
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use in various kinds of land and air
vechiles
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vehicles
. In the initial stage grown Plants and trees are collected using
a
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dedicated machinery,
afterwards
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the procedure of Pre-processing begins with a special machine which converts the leaves and
woods
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into Cellulose,
further
processing is done in a laboratory where Sugars are separated from Cellulose
alongwith
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several unknown Microbes are added. The final product, Ethanol is shipped from the manufacturer and transported around the globe to operate Cars, Trucks and Airplanes,
hence
these
vechiles emmit
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vehicles emit
Carbon-Dioxide
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the atmosphere which is used by the Plants and trees
alongwith
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along with
the sunlight for the growth and the whole cycle is repeated again.
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