The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summrise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram illustrates the procedures involved in the production of Ethanol,

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considered as a Biofuel.

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, six major steps are followed in the production, initiated by harvesting the grown plants and

tress

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trees

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and

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apply

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processing various organisms and substances using the machinery and

to manufacture

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Ethanol for

the

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use in various kinds of land and air

vechiles

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vehicles

. In the initial stage grown Plants and trees are collected using

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dedicated machinery,

afterwards

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the procedure of Pre-processing begins with a special machine which converts the leaves and

woods

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into Cellulose,

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processing is done in a laboratory where Sugars are separated from Cellulose

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several unknown Microbes are added. The final product, Ethanol is shipped from the manufacturer and transported around the globe to operate Cars, Trucks and Airplanes,

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these

vechiles emmit

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vehicles emit

Carbon-Dioxide

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the atmosphere which is used by the Plants and trees

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along with

the sunlight for the growth and the whole cycle is repeated again.

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The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summrise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

In some countries, the government is encouraging business and industries to move outside city center and relocate to regional areas. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

Some people say that to prevent illness and disease, governments should focus more on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information such as their hobbies and interests,and whether they are married or single.some people say that this information may be relevant and useful.others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is argued that parents of children who break the law should be punished as they are responsible for their children’s actions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is not necessary for people to travel to other places to learn about the culture.We can learn as much as from books, films, and the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?