You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The two line graphs illustrate the developments in the
posession
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possession
of electrical devices and the length of time dedicated to housework per week in one country in almost one century from 1920 to 2019. The ownership is measured in percentage and time in
hours
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.
Overall
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, it can be seen that
refrigerator
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refrigerators
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and
vacuum
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vacuums
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clear
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account for the highest proportion of ownership in
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last
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the last
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few decades,
while
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they were below the washing machine's figure in the early decades.
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, it is evidently noticed that housework
hours
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witnessed a continuous decline over the period given.
Firstly
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, the ownership of
refrigerator
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refrigerators
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spiked from around 6% in 1920 to about 56% and 90% in 1940 and 1960 respectively. Afterwards, it reached
the
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peak of 100% in 1980 and remained
uncheged
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unchecked
until 2019.
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, the
posession
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possession
of vacuum
cleaner
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cleaners
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registered three consecutive 20% growth and stood at 30%, 50%, 70% and 90% in 1920, 1940, 1960 and 1980 respectively, recording a considerable jump in every two decades. After
that
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it hit the summit of 100% in 2000 and remained stable until 2019.
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, the total weekly housework
hours
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declined significantly throughout the century. The figure stood at 50
hours
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in 1920 and
then
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faced three consecutive decreases and landed at about 15
hours
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in 1980
an
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remained relatively steady until 2000.
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it witnessed a final fall to 10
hours
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per week in 2019.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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