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You are planning to take a vacation. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter: Describe the vacation spot you have chosen Explain how you plan to spend your time there Invite your friend to join you on your vacation.

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Dear Misha Hope you are doing well. I am writing
this
 letter because we are planning to take a vacation to the best place in Uzbekistan. So, I wanted to share some
exiting
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 news with you
my
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 friend. Bukhara is the most beautiful city that I have ever seen in my life. So, that's why I am going to spend my summer holiday there. I already have a plan about the
placee
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place
places
 where we can go.
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, parks and historical places, and we can
also
 eat traditional meals of Bukhara in a restaurant. By the way, we are going to stay there for a week. Misha, I know you are going through a rough time nowadays and you are feeling so depressed. So, I invite you to join us because it can cheer you up. And you can be in
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 as usual. I hope you will be able to make it and go on holiday with us.
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 sincerely Pulat
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Task Achievement
To enhance your task achievement scores, ensure that each section of the letter fully addresses the prompt. Expand on the description of the vacation spot, offering more vivid details to engage the reader. When explaining how you plan to spend your time, a more thorough plan can provide a clearer picture and enhance persuasiveness.
Coherence & Cohesion
To improve coherence and cohesion, strive for smoother transitions between paragraphs and ideas. Use connecting phrases such as 'Furthermore,' 'In addition,' or 'Subsequently' to link ideas. While your letter has a clear structure, making these connections explicit can help guide your reader through your narrative more seamlessly.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • breathtaking scenery
  • cultural landmarks
  • itinerary
  • accommodations
  • excursions
  • gastronomic delights
  • leisure activities
  • unwind and relax
  • off the beaten track
  • once-in-a-lifetime experience
  • picturesque
  • explore
  • local cuisine
  • adventure
  • bonding
  • create memories
  • companionship
  • escapade
  • serenity
  • revitalize
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