The graph below depicts the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie charts below shows how electricity is used in an average home in the same country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make cmparison where relevant.
A glance at the line chart provides information about the request for
electricity
during winter and summer in England from 00:00 to 24:00. Meanwhile, the pie chart elucidates the usage of Use synonyms
electricity
in one country. Use synonyms
Overall
, in winter, the highest demand for power is between 21:00 and 24:00, Linking Words
while
in summer, the peak happens at 12:00 - 15:00 and 21:00 - 24:00. Linking Words
In addition
, heating rooms and heating water is the largest share of the usage.
On the one hand, in winter, at the beginning of the time, the Linking Words
electricity
consumption made up approximately 35.000 Use synonyms
units
, Use synonyms
then
, it increased significantly to 40.000 Linking Words
units
before falling to nearly 30.000 Use synonyms
units
at 05:00. After that, it rose dramatically to just below 50.000 Use synonyms
units
at 22:00. Use synonyms
Finally
, it dropped by about 10.000 Linking Words
units
by the end of the period. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, in summer, there are differences in the requirement for Linking Words
electricity
. At 00:00, it stood at approximately 18.000 Use synonyms
units
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then
decreased to nearly 15.000 Linking Words
units
at 07:00 before reaching its peak of 20.000 Use synonyms
units
at 14:00. Use synonyms
Nevertheless
, it fell again by 5.000 Linking Words
units
and back to hit its peak at 23:00.
Looking in more detail at the pie chart, heating tools made up around half of the total usage, comprising 52,5%, followed by kitchen amenities which brought in 17.5%. Use synonyms
Finally
, other electric tools consisted of 30% of the total.Linking Words
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