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The map below shows the plan of a proposed new town. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows the plan of a proposed new town. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The map provides a detailed overview of the planned layout of a new
town
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, highlighting the distribution of residential accommodations, industrial parks, and recreational areas.
Overall
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,
while
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 residential purposes will be the top priority in the new
town
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, the allocation of space dedicated to industrial and housing zones will be limited.
According to
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 the proposed map, the new
town
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 will be divided into two distinct parts by a ring road. Within the ring road, a large square featuring diverse amenities,
such
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 as two bus stations and parking lots, will be surrounded by six residential zones.
Furthermore
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,
this
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 square will serve as a major intersection to lead to the
town
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 centre.
Additionally
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, four recreational zones will be constructed, three of which will be located on the south side and positioned adjacent to one another.
However
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,
instead
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 of all the space outside the ring road being dedicated to residential purposes, two industrial parks, located on the north and south sides respectively, will
also
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 be developed. Notably, residents in
this
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 area will have limited leisure options
due to
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 the presence of only one entertainment destination located on the south side of the
town
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.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words town with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • residential housing
  • ring road
  • local roads
  • commercial zones
  • inhabitants
  • transportation system
  • bus terminals
  • train stations
  • recreational areas
  • sports facilities
  • educational institutions
  • schools
  • libraries
  • accessibility
  • industrial zones
  • outskirts
  • noise and pollution
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