The map below shows the plan of a proposed new town. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map provides a detailed overview of the planned layout of a new
town
, highlighting the distribution of residential accommodations, industrial parks, and recreational areas.
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Overall
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while
residential purposes will be the top priority in the new Linking Words
town
, the allocation of space dedicated to industrial and housing zones will be limited.
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According to
the proposed map, the new Linking Words
town
will be divided into two distinct parts by a ring road. Within the ring road, a large square featuring diverse amenities, Use synonyms
such
as two bus stations and parking lots, will be surrounded by six residential zones. Linking Words
Furthermore
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this
square will serve as a major intersection to lead to the Linking Words
town
centre. Use synonyms
Additionally
, four recreational zones will be constructed, three of which will be located on the south side and positioned adjacent to one another.
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However
, Linking Words
instead
of all the space outside the ring road being dedicated to residential purposes, two industrial parks, located on the north and south sides respectively, will Linking Words
also
be developed. Notably, residents in Linking Words
this
area will have limited leisure options Linking Words
due to
the presence of only one entertainment destination located on the south side of the Linking Words
town
.Use synonyms
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words town with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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