Some believe that most of teenager's spare
time
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spent on shopping, which Change the verb form
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afficts
both young people and the community they live in. I partly agree with Correct your spelling
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some problems Change the verb form
causes
to
their finance and Change preposition
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also
the environment and there are other Linking Words
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advantageous
advantages
adventageous
activities for them
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advantageous
spend
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spending
time
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on
shopping not only Change preposition
apply
make
use of money but Correct subject-verb agreement
makes
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more waste. Young people tend to purchase numerous items Correct subject-verb agreement
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them to get into trouble after a long Verb problem
cause
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, it is undeniable that most of these items will not be usedLinking Words
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long Change preposition
for a
time
as teenagers hardly consider their functions before buying them, which increases significantly the amount of trash and leads to countless potential effects on the environment and Use synonyms
the
society.
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are
prore
beneficial. Correct your spelling
prove
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enhance the standard of living and obtain skills for later. Wrong verb form
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Moreover
, young generations should spend Linking Words
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with family or playing sports, which prevents them from suffering health problems caused by a sedentary lifestyle Use synonyms
such
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writer believes that Linking Words
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trend has severe impacts on individuals and society and youngsters should take part in other activities that Linking Words
more
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