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The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.
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The first picture illustrates the layout of the floor plan in a central library 20 years ago, and the second picture shows some changes in the same
area
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 at present.
It is clear that
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this
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 library has undergone significant transformation, including the introduction of new machines and reader-facing services. Looking at the information in more detail, 20 years ago, upon entering the library, the enquiry desk, which contained ticket and book return services, was on the right, and it has been replaced by a cafe.
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, the reading room has been converted into a computer room. Another significant change is in the central
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, where two tables and several chairs were placed in the past, but these have been removed nowadays. In terms of the adult non-fiction books
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, it has become a multi-functional section, including an information desk and self-service machines.
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, the children's books
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 has been transformed into a lecture room, and the entertainment
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 has been altered to a place where events can be held and children's fiction books can be read.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • layout
  • shelving
  • reading area
  • reference section
  • encyclopedias
  • dictionaries
  • circulation desk
  • transactions
  • digital media
  • computer stations
  • multimedia rooms
  • café area
  • social environment
  • leisure-friendly
  • expanded reading areas
  • user experience
  • comfortable seating
  • children's section
  • engage younger readers
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