People
have different
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about whether
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competing in daily life is better than
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co-operating, no matter in working, studying, or daily life. In my opinion, even though
people
need
motivation
to do things better, I believe co-operating is better for our lives.
It is true that competition provides
motivation
, and
motivation
encourages
people
to obtain
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higher achievement.
For example
,
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holds examinations every semester to check the students' study
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. Most teachers set a goal for students and encourage them to compare themselves with other students who got a better score than them.
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this
way, some of them got improvement. Things are similar in working,
people
tend to compare themselves to their co-workers. And most
people
achieve a higher position than before. So, supporters hold their notion that competing is beneficial for every individual.
Even though competing provides
motivation
for individuals,
however
,
people
feel nervous and anxious in
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atmosphere.
That is
totally different from
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. There
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scientific evidence
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that our ancestors built and improved by
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with each other.
Additionally
,
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provides a gentle and easy method for individuals to improve themselves. It promotes learning other
people
's merits and communicating the tips, techniques and experiences with each other,
people
training and studying from each other. Their target is
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the previous themselves
instead
of each other, which lessens the feelings of stress and anxiety.
In conclusion, even though both competing and co-operating improve
people
and allow
people
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high success,
however
, I believe that co-operating
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more positive
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which is better than competing.