The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summrarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. 

Summrarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the procedures performed to recycle plastic
bottles
in a recycling centre.
Overall
, there are nine steps involved in the transformation of plastic
bottles
for the purpose of reuse. After collecting and sorting of
bottles
a variety of machineries are used to form a raw material which is
then
processed into a final product. In the first stage, the general public throws away the waste and unwanted items in the designated dustbins, which are
then
collected by a garbage truck and transported to a recycling centre, where the items are sorted into two different sections, in which the first section contains wastes which can be recycled
whereas
the second area is allocated for the things which cannot be recycled. Once the waste is sorted it is
then
compressed into blocks for the purpose of Crushing. The crushed material is collected in a container where it is washed and
then
passed through a machine which turns the plastics into plastic pellets which afterwards are heated to form a raw material. Once the raw material is finalised, it is
further
used to produce end products
such
as Lunch boxes, Stationery items, Clothes and
bottles
,
this
cycle continues when people throw away these products after using them.
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