The graph below gives information about the sales of the three most commonly purchased items in a particular bakery for the year 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the sales of the three most commonly purchased items in a particular bakery for the year 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided line chart gives data about the three most popular purchased products in a local bakery in 2014. The general trend shows that despite the fact that bread has had some fluctuations through the past of the months, it still remains the top sale by the end of the year.
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details will be discussed in the following text. It can be clearly seen that pies have had the lowest sales in the first 10 months,
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, in October it doubled the sales to 40,000 dollars. Following with bus as the second favourite choice, it shows a gradual increase in the first 5 months but it remains steady in the next 4.
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, it drops considerably to 30,000 dollars in December which is 10,000 less than when it started in January. As an
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trend, even though bread has sporadically changed, it started and finished with the same amount of sales that in comparison with buns and pies, reached double in purchases.
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Vocabulary: The word "remains" was used 2 times.
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