The diagram below shows how a central heating system in a house works. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how a central heating system in a house works.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given picture illustrates how a central heating system operates in a typical house in order to keep the internal climate and tap
water
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at a pre-set
temperature
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. The process runs through two stages, starting at a transitory state until reaching a steady state. In the transitory stage, the main goal is to fill the heater´s piping circuit with
water
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.
Initially
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, cold
water
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is taken from the local
water
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utility supplier and passed through a boiler, which is a device designed to exchange energy between burned fuel (gas or oil) and
water
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,
this
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fluid is
then
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pumped through some tubes and radiators, which are equipment used for exchanging
temperature
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between the running fluid and the air inside the house.
Finally
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,
water
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reaches back to the boiler. The amount of
water
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taken from the utility service has a specific volume
according to
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an engineering design,
this
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stage continually repeats until the
water
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gets a predefined
temperature
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. Once the system has reached the pre-set
temperature
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,
that is
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when it gets to a steady state, thanks to the high pressure on the piping circuit,
water
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is transported to a storage tank from the boiler, after the storage tank is completed,
water
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runs down to a sink and when the pressure again is high enough,
water
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deviates towards a spare
water
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tank which functions as a
water
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reserve for when the service is interrupted.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, temperature with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "reaches" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Central heating system
  • Boiler
  • Radiator
  • Pipes
  • Circulate
  • Heat source
  • Thermostat
  • Convection
  • Combustion
  • Energy-efficient
  • Flow rate
  • Expansion tank
  • Hot water cylinder
  • Insulation
  • Temperature control
  • Pump
  • Valves
  • Heat exchanger
  • Programmable
  • Zoned heating
  • Renewable energy
  • Double glazing
  • Carbon footprint
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