The chart shows the information about salt intake in the US in 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
The graph illustrates the consumption of
salt
in the United States in 2000. As can be seen, the salt
intake
from male
were higher rather than Fix the agreement mistake
males
female
Fix the agreement mistake
females
in
all Change preposition
of
difference
Replace the word
different
ages
.
To begin
, males who were under 6 ages
stood at 2000 milligrams
, those were according to
recommended child salt
intake
. Following that, man people who were adult
Change the noun form
adults
such
as 6-11 ages
, 12-19 ages
, and 20-39 ages
consume salt
at 4000 milligrams
, 4500 milligrams
, and 4000 milligrams
, respectively. Meanwhile, the elderly man
people Correct your spelling
aged
in
40-60 Change preposition
apply
ages
at just around 4000 milligrams
and 3500 milligrams
saw a consuming
by Replace the word
consumption
man
who were over 60 Fix the agreement mistake
men
ages
.
Subsequently
, female
Fix the agreement mistake
females
were
under 6 Unnecessary verb
apply
ages
and over 60 ages
just salt
intake
at under recommended adult salt
intake
, at
approximately 1000 Change preposition
of
milligrams
and 2500 milligrams
, respectively. On the other hand
, female
who have Fix the agreement mistake
females
age
Replace the word
aged
in
6-11, 12-19, 20-39, and 40-60 Change preposition
apply
ages
in above recommendation
adult Replace the word
the recommended
salt
intake
, with the same level around
3000 Change preposition
of around
milligrams
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Vocabulary: Replace the words salt, intake, ages, milligrams with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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