The bar chart shows the divorce rates in two European countries from 2011 to 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The chart indicates the percentage of
divorce
in Finland
and Sweden
in five years respectively starting from 2011.it is clear from the bar chart that the two counties experienced different increase
and Fix the agreement mistake
increases
decrease
in Correct subject-verb agreement
decreases
divorce
percentage
over the years .
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percentages
According to
what is shown Sweden
reached the
peak in 2012 Change the word
its
with
nearly 50 Change preposition
on
in contrast
, the lowest was in 2015 with
nearly 40 Change preposition
at
percent
it is obvious that Change the spelling
per cent
Sweden
Change noun form
Sweden's
divorce
rate is not steady
While
Finland
was almost 40 in 2011 and decreased to almost 30 in 2012 and it was the lowast
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lowest
while
Sweden
was in
the peak, Change preposition
at
Finland
experienced a jump in 2013 and in
2014 with almost 38 Change preposition
apply
percent
and 41 respectively Change the spelling
per cent
while
Finland
reached the peak in 2015 with almost 42 percent
Change the spelling
per cent
Sweden
was in 35 percent
which is the lowest Change the spelling
per cent
overall
we can say that the data indicates that the divorce
rates in these two countries has
different rise and decline.Change the verb form
have
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