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Writing Samples
Band 6

An old car was left on the street near your street several weeks ago. The car is now causing a problem for residents. Write a letter to the Council. In your letter: - Describe the car; - Outline the problems it is causing; - Tell the Council what you want them to do about it. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Councilor,

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Dear Councilor, I am a resident of Model Town, Street no. 12. I am writing
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 letter to let you that an abandoned vehicle on the main road in our area is causing many problems for the residents.
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 car has not moved from its place
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 more than two weeks. The car model is Toyota Magna and it was built in 1995. It is white in colour and it has no registration plate and the engine number is
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 not readable. As a matter of
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 you are aware that Model Town is a very busy and populated area.
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,
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left over
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 car is causing too many traffic jams.
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, it is attracting many anti-social elements, who use it as a shelter, because of
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 a new law and order situation is emerging in the area. In the end, I urge you to kindly coordinate with the local authorities and move
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 vehicle from the road because it is proving to be a headache for the commuters
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 for the locals. I am looking forward to having a positive response from your side. Yours faithfully, Jatinder.

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Single Idea per Paragraph
Ensure each paragraph contains a single main idea to improve clarity.
Suitable Writing Tone
Check for minor grammatical inaccuracies and ensure consistent formal tone.
Complete Response
The letter provides a clear description of the car and specific problems it is causing.
Greeting and Closing
The greeting and closing are appropriate and formal.
Logical Structure
The logical structure of the letter is generally good, with a clear sequence of points.
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