An old car was left on the street near your street several weeks ago. The car is now causing a problem for residents. Write a letter to the Council. In your letter: - Describe the car; - Outline the problems it is causing; - Tell the Council what you want them to do about it. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Councilor,
Dear Councilor,
I am a resident of Model Town, Street no. 12. I am writing
this
letter to let you that an abandoned vehicle on the main road in our area is causing many problems for the residents.
This
car has not moved from its place from
more than two weeks. The car model is Toyota Magna and it was built in 1995. It is white in colour and it has no registration plate and the engine number is Change preposition
for
also
not readable.
As a matter of fact
you are aware that Model Town is a very busy and populated area. Add a comma
fact,
Therefore
, this
left over
car is causing too many traffic jams. Correct your spelling
leftover
Further more
, it is attracting many anti-social elements, who use it as a shelter, because of Correct your spelling
Furthermore
this
a new law and order situation is emerging in the area.
In the end, I urge you to kindly coordinate with the local authorities and move this
vehicle from the road because it is proving to be a headache for the commuters and
Correct word choice
apply
as well as
for the locals.
I am looking forward to having a positive response from your side.
Yours faithfully,
Jatinder.Submitted by mrsdns on
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