Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter, describe what this book was about explain how this book influenced you say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

Good afternoon, dear sir/madam. My name is Anastassia, I am a student
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our local university. I wanted to share with you my filling about the
last
book
I
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read. I'm interested
to share
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in sharing
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it with you because your magazine
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recommended the
book
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weeks ago. We are talking about the
last
bestseller of Smith - " Manage
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". It's
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amazing project, which really helped me to find solutions for a few problems I had struggled
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Furthermore
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this
book
can support
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the
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time management,
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explain
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the importance of
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healthy lifestyle, and
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huge amount of different interesting facts. Even if you have known it before,
this
book
halps
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helps
you to settle all of the information in your head.
Finally
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repeat
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advertisement, and connect my letter, I
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it could help many people to solve their problems. Best regards. Anastassia.
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Try to provide more detailed explanations of how the book influenced you personally. For instance, you can elaborate on what specific solutions the book provided and how they impacted your life.
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Ensure consistency in tone and formal language throughout the letter. Some informal phrases like 'pretty amazing' can be substituted with more formal expressions such as 'extremely beneficial' or 'highly effective.'
coherence cohesion
Improve logical structure by having a clear introduction, body paragraphs with single ideas, and a concluding paragraph. For example, one paragraph could focus on describing the book, another on its impact on you, and a third on its potential impact on others.
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The letter effectively introduces the purpose of writing by clearly stating that it is about a book recommendation and its impact.
coherence cohesion
Includes a clear greeting and closing, which contribute to a respectful and polite tone.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph maintains a specific focus, which contributes to overall coherence.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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