You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter Say why he/she would not enjoy going to college Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her Suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Dear John
I hope
this
letter finds you well. I recently received your letter and understood that you are confused about whether to go to college or enter the job
market. And I had
thought about it , Wrong verb form
have
therefore
I wanted to share my advice . I believe getting a job
might be the best choice for you right now and I would explain why.
Firstly
, college is not for everyone and I know about you , therefore
it is not enjoyable
or beneficial place for you. College involves tasks that don't interest you and might feel like a waste of time for you. Correct article usage
an enjoyable
However
If you work somewhere you can earn money and improve your experience for another better Add a comma
However,
job
.
Secondly
starting a job
could be useful for you and working right now improve your skills
, for
instance
you can be well-rounded and you can pick up new Add a comma
instance,
skills
very quickly . In the future
you will have Add a comma
future,
sense
of independence and financial security, as you can earn and save money .
Choosing jobs in terms , Add an article
a sense
if
Correct your spelling
of
you
like talking with people or you have Correct word choice
whether you
communicating
Replace the word
communication
skills
, the
customer service fits you , but if you like any technologic and if you have any technology Correct article usage
apply
skills
you can be IT
programmer , Correct article usage
an IT
therefore
you could choose job
Add an article
a job
the job
that is
suitable for you.
Choosing job
does not mean closing doors on studying forever , if you want to study later you could do it . In Correct article usage
a job
fact
there are jobs that need Add a comma
fact,
degree
so you can study after improving your Add an article
a degree
job
skills
.
I hope it helps you make decision
and no matter what you choose, I will support you.
I looking forward to catching up soon.
Yours sincerely
AsadbekAdd an article
a decision
the decision
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coherence cohesion
Try to organize your ideas into clear paragraphs with each one focusing on a single idea. This will improve the overall coherence and make your arguments easier to follow.
task achievement
Watch out for minor grammatical errors and consistency in tense usage. Proofreading can help you catch these issues.
task achievement
Your letter has a friendly and supportive tone, which is very suitable for the task.
task achievement
You included all the necessary components in your response: reasons for not enjoying college, benefits of getting a job, and job suggestions.
coherence cohesion
Your greeting and closing are well executed and add a personal touch to the letter.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.