The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. (Line graph)

The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. (Line graph)
The line graph presents the
number
of
questions
a certain Tourist Information office in a specific city sent to people in three different ways in 2011 over six months.
Overall
, the highest
number
of
inquiries
received was by a face-to-face meeting. Despite, the majority of queries being asked by telephone
initially
,
this
was surpassed by the in-person method in the end. Approximately 420
questions
were sent to people in person in Jan before it steadily increased to 800 in March,
then
, the figure of
inquiries
increased significantly to about 1230 the next month. Throughout the
last
three months, the
number
of
questions
that were asked in person continued growing until it peaked at around 1870 by the end of the period. the
number
of
inquiries
taken by telephone fluctuated between January and March, but it remained at 1000 for another month. Starting from April, the figure dramatically escalated, reaching
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1600
inquiries
by June. In the beginning,
questions
sent by email were approximately 770. After that, they consistently plunged before witnessing a sharp decrease starting in March to May, sending only about 380
inquiries
. Eventually, plateaued at
this
level for the remainder of the period.
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