IELTS Academic Writing Task 1 ➢ You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph gives information about the age of the population of Iceland between 1990 and 2020. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The given bar graph serves as an insightful illustration of the distribution of people’s

age

in

the

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Iceland over the three-decade period starting from 1990 – 2020. The units are measured in percentage. The overarching impression gleaned from the chart is that the

population

of the pupils in

age

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bracket

of 25- 54 grew substantially by 2020. On

contrary

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, the

population

of

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15-24 years of

age

plummeted significantly.

To begin

with, in 1990, people falling under the

age

bracket

of 55- 64 and 65 and above were almost the same approximately 10%. Which remained unchanged in the following decade. And mass under the

age

bracket

of 0-14 and 15-24, were close to 25% in 1990 and the decade after.

However

, the size of

population

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for

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pupil

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pupils

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ranging from 25-54

was increasing

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steadily for

first

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three decades and

then

skyrocketed in 2020 reaching almost 50% by 2020.

In addition

to that, in

year

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2010, people in the

age

group of 65 and above and, 15-24 were around 13%.

While

the

population

under the

age

group of 15-24 dropped drastically in the following decade, the

population

size for citizens under 65 and above

bracket

remained the same.