The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The
bar
chart
illustrates the number of tourists travelling abroad over a 10-year period from the year 1985 to 1995. The line
chart
presents the percentage of Japan's travellers visiting Australia in the same period.
Overall
, in general, the
bar
chart
depicts an upward trend during
this
period.
However
, there are two significant fluctuations in the line
chart
, respectively 1988 - 1990 and 1993-1995.
Initially
,
while
the
bar
chart
only accounted for 5
million
tourists in 1885,
this
number gradually increased to around 11
million
until 1990.
Subsequently
, it approximately declined to 10.5
million
in 1991
then
consistently rose, ultimately comprising 15
million
in 1995. Looking at the line
chart
in detail, it showed a similar pattern to the
bar
chart
, with the exception of the two fluctuations.
Firstly
, it merely made up 2 per cent, continuously increasing by 5% in 1989.
Nevertheless
, there was a major fluctuation between 1988 and 1990.
After
this
fluctuation, it climbed sustainably, roughly constituted 6.2% in 1994, and eventually decreased to 6% in 1995.
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