The table below shows expenditures of four car companies on advertising in the UK in 2002.

The table below shows expenditures of four car companies on advertising in the UK in 2002.
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The table compares the spending of four car corporations on advertising in Britain in 2002.
Overall
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, it can be seen TV was the biggest expenditure for all companies.
While
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Cinema was the least popular option for companies, Radio had the same
number
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of spending in all organizations.
According to
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the graph, TV was by far the highest spending for all corporations, accounting for 70 and 65
million
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dollars
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for Cetirizine and Vauxhall respectively. The
number
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of the press was the second most expenditure for Renault and Rover, illustrating 45 and 38
million
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dollars
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respectively. Regarding Outdoors, the
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was the same for Renault and Vauxhall at 7
million
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dollars
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,
while
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the figure for Cetirizine was higher than that of Rover by 1
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dollars
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.
Similarly
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, Rover and Cetirizine did not advertise in the Cinema, but the
number
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of Renault exceeded that of Vauxhall by 1
million
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dollars
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.
On the contrary
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, the amount of spending on Radio depicted the same at 15
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dollars
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in all organizations.
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