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The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in australia. Sumerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparations where relevant

The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in australia. Sumerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparations where relevant
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The graphs depict the percentage of
tourists
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 from different regions of the world and some details of activities and accommodation in Australia.
Overall
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, the numbers of
tourists
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 from the US and
Europe
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 are equal, and they together consist of 70% of the whole tourist's amount. American
tourists
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 seem to tend as Asian ones, surprisingly,
tourists
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 from
Europe
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 and other regions choose the same variants in terms of accommodation and activities. Looking at the graphs in more detail, it is evident that the highest percentage of
tourists
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 belongs to
Europe
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 which makes up 37%
this
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 number is approximately twofold than the level of US visitors. Australia is visited the most rate by
tourists
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 from
Europe
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 and the US, though, they stay here for the longest time, respectively 16 days and 14 days. Turning to accommodation and activity, there is a notable similarity between Asians and Americans. Both of them book high-star hotels and visit popular places.
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, Europeans and other regions' citizens seem to like camping or renting a caravan
while
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 spending their time mostly at the seaside.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tourists, europe with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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