Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates the plan which takes place in Brandfield
city
, proposing two sites to install a new shopping mall for the
area
.
Overall
,
it is clear that
although
S1 is located close to the
city
centre
and other facilities, there is only an industrial
area
near S2. On the one hand, S1 is surrounded by a housing estate, a
city
centre
a golf course and a park. There is a railway, which connects from northwest and southwest areas
while
passing the
city
's central
area
. The river lies between the north and southwest, which is across the
city
centre
. Turning to the other hand,
although
S2 is located on the fringe of the
area
,
this
area
is smaller than S1. There is a railway and a road around S2.
This
road runs south to northeast, which is separated into two roads below the
city
centre
connection. In front of the railway line, there is an industrial
area
opposite S2.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "although".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words city, area, centre with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proximity
  • residential area
  • industrial zone
  • city center
  • main road
  • benefits
  • convenience
  • traffic congestion
  • accessibility
  • workers
  • compare
  • differences
  • pros and cons
  • suitable
  • analysis
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