The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The given maps illustrate the blueprint of present and future plans
of
Islip town centre.
Change preposition
for
Overall
, the further
planned
will Replace the word
plan
has
a significant transformation Change the verb form
have
regard
to new constructions of new facilities, housing, transportation services, and roads for a better living standard.
Change preposition
in regard
Initially
, the current town consisted of public facilies
Correct your spelling
facilities
such
as shops, accommodation, school
and Correct article usage
a school
park
. Correct article usage
a park
Moreover
, only one main road to reach a desire
destination. Looking at the planned development, public transportation and Replace the word
desired
car
Correct article usage
a car
park
are added abjecent
to the shopping centre. Meanwhile, an idea Correct your spelling
adjacent
to
build more housing on the Add a missing verb
is to
north-east
side and near the Correct your spelling
northeast
park
to fulfill
the extension of the population.
Change the spelling
fulfil
In addition
,a new duel highway is suggested to contrust
around the facilities in terms of Correct your spelling
contrast
construct
convenient
and reduced Replace the word
convenience
trafic
congestion. Correct your spelling
traffic
However
, some buildings: educational institution
, Fix the agreement mistake
institutions
park
, and old shops still remained Fix the agreement mistake
parks
unspoils
because Correct your spelling
unspoiled
such
places still
needed by the communities for relaxation and academic purposes. Add a missing verb
are still
Lastly
, pedestrians
pathway is planned, allowing them to walk safely to Change noun form
pedestrians'
pedestrian's
next
places.Correct article usage
the next
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words park with synonyms.
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