In the interest of road safety, cyclists should be required to pass a test before they are allowed on public roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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It is argued that individuals who ride bicycles should be required to pass an examination in order to be allowed to use public roads in a safe way.

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essay completely agrees with the previous statement since different bicycle

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occur

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and anyone who uses the

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(especially the ones who own a vehicle) should be aware of

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safety

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. One strong reason why I agree with

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idea is that there is an unfortunate

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amount of bicycle

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that happen daily in different countries. Many of these

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could have been avoided if cyclists were much more knowledgeable and aware of traffic

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and

road

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safety

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in general.

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week in Lima, Peru

a 18 year old

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an 18-year-old

girl decided to go on a ride without wearing a helmet thinking that it was not necessary to do it

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the short trip she would make. Unfortunately, she got distracted because of a march happening at the moment and fell down from the bike, resulting in a

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injury around her head.

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, we tend to keep in mind that people who drive a vehicle that

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of hurting others should be the ones learning about

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safety

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or taking tests.

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is not true. Every person who uses the

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(especially that population who owns a vehicle) should be aware enough of the different traffic

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and

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safety

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guidelines since they must keep in mind any possible accident, how to avoid it and the devastating consequences of not following

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, cyclists should learn from certain workshops

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as “

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learning by taking a proper test. In conclusion, it is recommended to apply a test for cyclists before getting

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permission to use the public roads.

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is suggested

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the high amount of bicycle

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that happen

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and the fact that anyone who uses the

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should be aware of traffic

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and

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safety

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in order to be responsible

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his life and

others’

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others

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Your opinion

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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4 paragraphs

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Topic Vocabulary:

road safety
mandatory testing
uniform understanding
responsible behavior
administrative efforts
financial burdens
implementation and enforcement
deterrent
public health
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