The graph below gives information of the numbers of participants for different activitirs at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph compares the
number
of participants
for five different activities held at a social centre in Melbourne from 2000 to 2020.
Looking from an overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that the film club class
had by far the most participants
over the whole period shown. Also
, while
the number
of amateur dramatics class
participants
decreased, the figure
for musical performances class
increased.
The most popular class
at the social centre was the film club. It started with 65 participants
in 2000, fell to 60 participants
in 2010, and nearly returned to its initial value by 2020. The number
of participants
in the martial arts class
started at just above 35 and fluctuated between 30 and 40 a few times through the period shown. However
, it returned to 35 again by 2020.
The figure
for amateur dramatics and table tennis started at 25 and 16 attendances in 2000, and after a slight increase in 2005 for both figures, they became equal with 20 participants
by 2010 . Afterwards, while
the figure
for table tennis participants
rose substantially to approximately 53, the figure
for amateur dramatics decreased sharply to just above 5 participants
. It is worth mentioning that musical performance classes had no participants
until 2005. At that time, the number
of participants
increased gradually, reaching a peak of 19.Submitted by amir1375.6 on
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