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The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Your report should comprise a minimum of 150 words

The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Your report should comprise a minimum of 150 words
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The given diagram illustrates the process that shows how biofuel name is
ethanol
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 manufactured.
Overall
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, what is important
that
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is that
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 the Etanole fuel has a circulation that has 9 various steps that
are starting
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start
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 in the forest and end in
air
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the air
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.
According to
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 the picture, planets and trees, which are the main things that
Ethanol
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 from them, receive sunlight and carbon dioxide for growing;
then
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 people or agriculture devices harvest these planets and move them to the factory. In the manufactory at the start trees in pre-processing become cellulose. The graph demonstrates cellulose in some processes becomes sugars;
thereafter
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, people who work in
this
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 place add microbes to
sugarsowing
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sugars
to
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apply
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fact the reaction between these things
produce
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produces
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Ethanol
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, which is a fuel for vehicles
such
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 as tracks, cars, and planes. The things which use
Ethanol
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 fuel generate carbon dioxide, which is the main gas that vegetation areas need for growing.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words ethanol with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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