The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The presented graph illustrates the
number
of overseas tourists to three diverse areas in a particular country in Europe between 1987 and 2007, it is clear that
the lakes had the lowest visitors
in 1987.
Correct quantifier usage
number of visitors
Initially
, the mountain
visitors increased dramatically between the two decades, Correct quantifier usage
number of mountain
whereas
the number
of people that went to the lakes boosted at the highest rate in 2002, but then
dropped gradually in the following years
. Moreover
, the coast tourists decreased in the first five years
, but after 1992 it skyrocketed and became the most popular destination in 2007.
Furthermore
, all overseas that are provided had a certain period that witnessed a lack of interest from the community, starting with the coast, in 1992 it had the lowest number
of visitors compared to other years
, however
, in that year it was the most preferred place for people than any other type.
To sum up
, the coast dominated the survey and had the highest number
of tourists in all years
except 2002 where it was the second after lakes.Submitted by yazanalt523 on
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