The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending.
The pie chart compares the percentages of four different locations in a town in Australia where
dance
classes
are held, and the bar graph shows the number of participants
in three types of dances in two age groups.
Looking from an overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that close to half of the dance
classes
are held in private studios. Also
, ballet dance
was more popular among students
under 11 years
old, while
students
between 11 and 16 tend to join in modern dance
classes
.
According to
the pie chart, with
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private
studios were where most Change preposition
of private
dance
classes
took place, while
college-based studios accounted for the least, at only %10. The percentages for school halls, and community halls (and others) are %24 and %18, respectively.
Looking at the bar graph, ballet classes
had 300 participants
aged between 11 and 16 years
old, while
the amount of individuals younger than 11 was double that. The number of participants
in tap dance
classes
was almost similar in both age groups. It was 450 for people under 11 years
old and for students
aged between 11 and 16 years
old was approximately 425. The last
dance
class is modern dances. While
300 students
attended modern dance
classes
, the number of participants
aged between 11 and 16 years
old was just above 500 participants
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