A close relative of yours is having a birthday lunch next week, but you know you will be working Write a letter to you boss or supervisor to ask for some time off . In your letter, -explain the situation and why you particularly want to attend the lunch -specify the dates , times and amount of time off you will need -offer to work late or come in early another time to make up for the time

Dear boss I am writing to request you to give me one day for my
brothers
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birthday
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, I am going to book a table
on
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restaurant
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a restaurant
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and I will call my relatives. I know one of the best
chef
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on
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the restaurant. His name is
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. I will meet with him on
friday
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. On
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, my brotherʼs birthday . I have a lot of ideas to spend my brotherʼs birthday.
However
, I havenʼt
choosen
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chosen
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gift
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yet. I want to buy him
expensive
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car for his
birhday
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birthday
. Because
of
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he always
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to
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work on foot. When he
cames
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to
restaurant
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,
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the violonist
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violonist
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violinist
wait him
with playing
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music. So that you will allow me and give me 1
milion
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million
dollar . On another day I will work early.
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. His
birhday
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birthday
is very important
for
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me. In my
opinion
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you understand me .
This
month
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will work hard and I will pay back my debt. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
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faithfully Milad
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coherence cohesion
Improve the logical structure by clearly organizing your letter into distinct paragraphs. Separate the explanation of the situation, the specific request for time off, and the offer to compensate.
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Ensure a formal and respectful tone throughout the letter. Avoid making unrealistic or inappropriate requests, such as asking for a large sum of money in this context.
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Provide specific dates and times for the requested time off to make your request clearer.
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The writer shows a strong desire to attend their brother's birthday, which adds a personal touch to the letter.

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