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Band 6.5

The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given maps compare changes that happened
fto
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to
 the site of College 2 several times( 2006 and now).
Overall
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, it is important that the vegetation areas
destroyed
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be destroyed
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;
however
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, buildings which help students to have a good time in their institute have been increasing.
According to
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 the pictures, In the past next to the road was the
car
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park
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, yet today, a bus stop and
car
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park
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 , which is the same region as
the
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in the
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 past, but
devided
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divided
to
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into
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Use synonyms
car
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the car
a car
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park
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 and bike storage. The Library, which was next to the
car
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park
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, has moved to the zone which is near two college buildings, which are the same as the prior;
additionally
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, it has two roads to them. The graphs illustrate The
Sport
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Sports
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centre
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 is
the
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in the
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 same position as the
last
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 time;
moreover
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, they added
Sports
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the Sports
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centre
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 next to it
instead
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 of the
last
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 Library. The previous path has
altered
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been altered
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 to a square which has a
Cafeterian
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Cafeteria
 in the
centre
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;
furthermore
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, it has 5 different roads to the Sports
centre
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,
car
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park
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, bus stop, and
callege
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college
 departments.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words car, park, centre with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • underwent significant changes
  • consisted of
  • large open space
  • utilized
  • relocated
  • limited facilities and amenities
  • wider range of facilities and amenities
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