The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

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The given maps compare changes that happened to the site of College 2 several times( 2006 and now).

Overall

, it is important that the vegetation areas be destroyed;

however

, buildings which help students to have a good time in their institute have been increasing.

According to

the pictures, In the past next to the road was the

car

park

, yet today, a bus stop and

car

park

, which is the same region as in the past, but divided into the

car

park

and bike storage. The Library, which was next to the

car

park

, has moved to the zone which is near two college buildings, which are the same as the prior;

additionally

, it has two roads to them. The graphs illustrate The Sports

centre

is in the same position as the

last

time;

moreover

, they added the Sports

centre

next to it

instead

of the

last

Library. The previous path has been altered to a square which has a Cafeteria in the

centre

;

furthermore

, it has 5 different roads to the Sports

centre

car

park

, bus stop, and college departments.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words car, park, centre with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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8Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

182 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

underwent significant changes
consisted of
large open space
utilized
relocated
limited facilities and amenities
wider range of facilities and amenities

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