The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
The given maps compare changes that happened to the site of College 2 several times( 2006 and now).
Overall
, it is important that the vegetation areas be destroyed;
however
, buildings which help students to have a good time in their institute have been increasing.
According to
the pictures, In the past next to the road was the
car
park
, yet today, a bus stop and
car
park
, which is the same region as in the past, but divided into the
car
park
and bike storage. The Library, which was next to the
car
park
, has moved to the zone which is near two college buildings, which are the same as the prior;
additionally
, it has two roads to them. The graphs illustrate The Sports
centre
is in the same position as the
last
time;
moreover
, they added the Sports
centre
next to it
instead
of the
last
Library. The previous path has been altered to a square which has a Cafeteria in the
centre
;
furthermore
, it has 5 different roads to the Sports
centre
,
car
park
, bus stop, and college departments.
Submitted by maryamkazemi968 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Vocabulary: Replace the words car, park, centre with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
Topic Vocabulary:
  • underwent significant changes
  • consisted of
  • large open space
  • utilized
  • relocated
  • limited facilities and amenities
  • wider range of facilities and amenities
What to do next:
Look at other essays: