the chart and graph below give information about sales and share prices for Cica-Cola. write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
These two graphs illustrate data about the amount of
Coca- Cola
bottles that Correct your spelling
Coca-Cola
have been
sold in 2000 divided by Wrong verb form
were
continents
and the value of each Coca-Cola’s share
over a six year
period between 1996 to 2001.
Add a hyphen
six-year
Overall
, what stands out from the pie chart
is that,
Coca-Cola has more buyers in North and Latin America than other Remove the comma
apply
continents
.
With respect to the pie chart
, it can be seen that 17.1 billion unit
Fix the agreement mistake
units
Change preposition
of case
case
Fix the agreement mistake
cases
have been
sold in 2000 and North America has the largest Wrong verb form
were
share
among the other continents
with 30.4 per cent
, followed by Latin America by 25.7 per cent
, which it
means these two Correct pronoun usage
apply
continents
with nearly 56.1 per cent
have bigger
Add an article
a bigger
share
than other four continents
. Following
this
, Europe and Asia are next in the chart
respectively, with 20.5 and 16.4 per cent
.
As regards to
the line Change preposition
apply
chart
,the price started at just over 30 dollar
. Change to a plural noun
dollars
However
, there was an upward trend in the first three year
and the value of each Change to a plural noun
years
share
increased dramatically to reach almost 80 dollar
. Change to a plural noun
dollars
Next,
there was a downward trend from 1998 to 2001 and the price decreased steadily to reach about 60 dollar
.Change to a plural noun
dollars
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