the chart and graph below give information about sales and share prices for Cica-Cola. write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

the chart and graph below give information about sales and share prices for Cica-Cola.

write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
These two graphs illustrate data about the amount of
Coca- Cola
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Coca-Cola
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bottles that
have been
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were
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sold in 2000 divided by
continents
and the value of each Coca-Cola’s
share
over a
six year
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six-year
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period between 1996 to 2001.
Overall
, what stands out from the pie
chart
is that
,
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Coca-Cola has more buyers in North and Latin America than other
continents
. With respect to the pie
chart
, it can be seen that 17.1 billion
unit
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units
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of case
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case
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cases
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have been
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were
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sold in 2000 and North America has the largest
share
among the other
continents
with 30.4 per
cent
, followed by Latin America by 25.7 per
cent
, which
it
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apply
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means these two
continents
with nearly 56.1 per
cent
have
bigger
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a bigger
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share
than other four
continents
.
Following
this
, Europe and Asia are next in the
chart
respectively, with 20.5 and 16.4 per
cent
. As regards
to
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the line
chart
,the price started at just over 30
dollar
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dollars
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.
However
, there was an upward trend in the first three
year
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years
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and the value of each
share
increased dramatically to reach almost 80
dollar
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dollars
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.
Next,
there was a downward trend from 1998 to 2001 and the price decreased steadily to reach about 60
dollar
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dollars
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words continents, share, chart, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • revenue
  • annual sales
  • share prices
  • fluctuation
  • correlation
  • trend
  • stock market performance
  • seasonal variations
  • volatility
  • hypothesize
  • period
  • generate
  • detailed
  • millions of dollars
  • price per share
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