the chart and graph below give information about sales and share prices for Cica-Cola. write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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These two graphs illustrate data about the amount of

Coca- Cola

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Coca-Cola

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bottles that

have been

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were

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sold in 2000 divided by

continents

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and the value of each Coca-Cola’s

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over a

six year

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period between 1996 to 2001.

Overall

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, what stands out from the pie

chart

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is that

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apply

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Coca-Cola has more buyers in North and Latin America than other

continents

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. With respect to the pie

chart

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, it can be seen that 17.1 billion

unit

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units

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of case

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case

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cases

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have been

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sold in 2000 and North America has the largest

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among the other

continents

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with 30.4 per

cent

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, followed by Latin America by 25.7 per

cent

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, which

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apply

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means these two

continents

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with nearly 56.1 per

cent

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have

bigger

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a bigger

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than other four

continents

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this

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, Europe and Asia are next in the

chart

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respectively, with 20.5 and 16.4 per

cent

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. As regards

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the line

chart

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,the price started at just over 30

dollar

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dollars

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, there was an upward trend in the first three

year

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years

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and the value of each

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increased dramatically to reach almost 80

dollar

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dollars

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there was a downward trend from 1998 to 2001 and the price decreased steadily to reach about 60

dollar

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Vocabulary: Replace the words continents, share, chart, cent with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
4
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

194 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

revenue
annual sales
share prices
fluctuation
correlation
trend
stock market performance
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