The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking the visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two period
The charts illustrate the proportion of satisfaction by visitors to Ashdown Museum before and after
refurbishment
.
Overall
, the dissatisfaction rate was the highest before refurbishment
at 40% and the same was with satisfaction after refurbishment
however
, in both surveys no response remained the same.
The Satisfaction rate shows an increase of 10% after refurbishment
however
, the dissatisfied ratio experienced a decrease of 25%. Moreover
, there was an increase in the very satisfactory visitors to the before refurbishment
ratio. In both survey
, no response was the same.Change to a plural noun
surveys
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