The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the average recorded monthly weather in
Paris
,
Dubai
, and Sydney throughout the
year
.
Overall
,
Dubai
and
Paris
had upward trends till August and rose until the end of the
year
.
On the contrary
,
Dubai
went down every month consistently till August.
Paris
started the
year
with the lowest temperature among the other two countries but surged rapidly till August.
However
, it plunged significantly and remained the same as January in December.
On the other hand
,
Dubai
had a similar growth as
Paris
for the next 7 months, and in August, it recorded 35 degrees Celsius, the highest figures of the
year
. Since
then
, it has decreased considerably, the
last
recorded heat in December was above 20 degrees Celsius. Being under 25 degrees Celsius, the highest in January, Sydney plunged considerably throughout the middle of the
year
. Despite that, there was a gradual growth and became the highest again.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words paris, dubai, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "plunged" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "considerably" was used 2 times.
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