The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. many of the problems young people now experience such as juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this option?

Internationally

the

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women

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position

have

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significantly changed in the

last

two decades,

although

this

has boosted the world

ecomony

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economy

quite a bit,

but

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this

change

have

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caused

direct

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impact on

children

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personal growth resulting in juvenile

deliquency

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delinquency

and other

such

problems. I partly agree with

this

statement as the

women

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position in a family has changed, I believe

men

should understand the change

the

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family dynamic and support

family

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in other ways than financially.

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essay will describe

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To begin

with,

womens

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women

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have empowered and made their position in

the

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society by standing up for themselves a positive side of

this

, working

women

and

men

made a family financially stable and allowed a family to grow simultaneously.

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, comparing one person with two has revealed, financial stability,

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opportunity

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for other family members to make stronger bonds with

children

. Showing the fact there

is

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multiple benefits of

women

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empowerment.

However

,

this

development has

also

surfaced the fact that empowering and working

women

has left

children

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personal development affected, resulting in

children

facing

issue

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such

as juvenile delinquency. To counter

this

issue

men

could step up and support

thier

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their

family,

this

opportunity could allow

men

to make a stronger bond with their

children

. In conclusion, on the one hand, empowering

women

is beneficial for both family and society,

While

on the other,

This

development leaves

children

with their affected personal growth.

Although

there are multiple

solution

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to overcome

this

issue

but

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the most affected one is for

men

to step up and support their

family

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families

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,