The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The following diagram illustrates the procedures involved in recycling disposed aluminium
cans
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Overall
, There are a total of seven steps in the process of can reclamation, starting with the discarding of waste in trash Linking Words
cans
and ending with recycled Use synonyms
cans
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a cyclic process.
The first step involves the proper disposal of used Linking Words
cans
in designated trash bins. The collected used Use synonyms
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collected by trucks, and transported to a recycling centre where these Linking Words
cans
are carefully cleaned and sorted with respect to their colours, sizes and shapes. They are Use synonyms
then
shredded into smaller pieces for better compression, after which they are compressed into larger chunks.
These proportions of compressed chunks are melted in a furnace container, Linking Words
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pressed into thinner metal sheets. These sheets are Linking Words
then
rolled into several Linking Words
cans
using automated machines. Use synonyms
Finally
, these newly produced Linking Words
cans
are ready for consumption and are made available to factories.Use synonyms
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