The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The following diagram illustrates the procedures involved in recycling disposed aluminium
cans
.
Overall
, There are a total of seven steps in the process of can reclamation, starting with the discarding of waste in trash cans
and ending with recycled cans
at the end
. Furthermore
, this
is also
a cyclic process.
The first step involves the proper disposal of used cans
in designated trash bins. The collected used cans
are then
collected by trucks, and transported to a recycling centre where these cans
are carefully cleaned and sorted with respect to their colours, sizes and shapes. They are then
shredded into smaller pieces for better compression, after which they are compressed into larger chunks.
These proportions of compressed chunks are melted in a furnace container, then
they are further
pressed into thinner metal sheets. These sheets are then
rolled into several cans
using automated machines. Finally
, these newly produced cans
are ready for consumption and are made available to factories.Submitted by shahroz99dev on
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