The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The  diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans.

Summarise the information by selecting and  reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The following diagram illustrates the procedures involved in recycling disposed aluminium
cans
.
Overall
, There are a total of seven steps in the process of can reclamation, starting with the discarding of waste in trash
cans
and ending with recycled
cans
at the end
.
Furthermore
,
this
is
also
a cyclic process. The first step involves the proper disposal of used
cans
in designated trash bins. The collected used
cans
are
then
collected by trucks, and transported to a recycling centre where these
cans
are carefully cleaned and sorted with respect to their colours, sizes and shapes. They are
then
shredded into smaller pieces for better compression, after which they are compressed into larger chunks. These proportions of compressed chunks are melted in a furnace container,
then
they are
further
pressed into thinner metal sheets. These sheets are
then
rolled into several
cans
using automated machines.
Finally
, these newly produced
cans
are ready for consumption and are made available to factories.
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