You recently noticed a local restaurant that was offering a part time job. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In you letter, Explain that you would like to apply for the job, give some details of any relevant experience that you have, specify the days and times that would suit you
Dear Sir,
I am writing
this
letter to you to express my deep interest in the position of baker in your restaurant. Currently, I am working as cooker at Tim Hortons a well-renowned restaurant in Canada. Apart from
this
, I am a full-time student at Conestoga College enrolled in the hospital management and culinary services course.
I found myself the most suitable candidate for this
job post because I not only have Canadian client experience but also
have theoretical knowledge of preparing food as per Canada's dietary habits. In addition
to this
, I am accelerating in the fast-paced environment which helps me to achieve my weekly and monthly target sales. Above all
, I am a certified server and food handler who will bring discipline and regulations to your workplace.
If you will provide me an opportunity I will be there for an interview on Friday 27th September at noon. I will bring my Resume and experience certificate. If you want me to bring any other necessary documents you can call me on the number mentioned below.
Yours faithfully
Navdeep Kaur
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task achievement
Ensure that your opening sentence directly mentions the job you saw advertised, to clearly align with the prompt which asks for an explanation of your interest in the job seen. This adds clarity and better task achievement.
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You stated your availability for an interview but not specifically the days and times you can work. Try adding that information to fully cover the prompt’s requirements.
coherence cohesion
Enhance your logical structure by clearly outlining your paragraphs with transition words or phrases. This helps the reader follow your train of thought more smoothly.
greeting and closing
Your formal greeting and closing are well done, maintaining a professional tone throughout the letter.
task achievement
Your experience and qualifications are very relevant and clearly stated, which helps to effectively convey your suitability for the job.
single idea per paragraph
You effectively use single ideas per paragraph, making your letter organized and easy to read.