The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries in tonnes. Summarise the informantion by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart compares the number of imported
tea
and coffee
by Canada
,the US,Germany
and the UK
in tonnes
measure.
It is obvious that the leading market of
importing Change preposition
for
tea
compared to the other three countries is the UK
which makes 80000 tonnes
.On the other
hand
we have Add a comma
hand,
Germany
which is overtaking other countries in the import of tea
by providing 50000 tonnes
.
While
there are countries leading market
in certain Fix the agreement mistake
markets
type
of drink,Fix the agreement mistake
types
however
,Canada
and the US import almost the same amount of tea
and coffee.US
imported a bit more Correct your spelling
coffee. The US
tea
than Canada
which is approximately 21000 tonnes
whereas
Canada
imported 20000 tonnes
.In addition
,40000 tonnes
were imported by the US while
Canada
imported a bit less which is 39000 tonnes
.
Surely the main importer of tea
is the UK
which imported 80000 tonnes
doubling the number of Germany
which imported 40000 tonnes
.However
,Germany
leads the market of coffee
by importing 50000 tonnes
of coffee
while
UK
imports 30000 Correct article usage
the UK
tonnes
which is significantly lower than the UK
's number.Submitted by talgattan4ez on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tea, coffee, canada, germany, uk, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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