The graph below shows the number of Asian elephants between 1997 and 2004

The graph below shows the number of Asian elephants between 1997 and 2004
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Information pertaining to how many
elephants
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in 9 specific nations from 1997 to 2004 has been provided in the given bar chart. In gẻneral,
it is clear that
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the
number
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of
elephants
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in 1997
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greater than in 2004 in all Asian nations with the
expection
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exception
expectation
of Cambodia.
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, India saw the highest
number
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in both years. Looking at
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further
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detail, it is apparent that in 1997, India had
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number
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of
elephants
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at nearly 10000,
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followed
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with
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5500 and 3950 in Myanmar and Thailand respectively. The
number
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of
elephants
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in Malaysia and Sri Lanka was the same at exactly 3000. With Vietnam, Cambodia, Laos and China, the figure ranged from 1000 to 1500
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Over
7 years later, there was a decrease in
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of India to 7500. Myanmar and Sri Lanka saw
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similar trend and dipped into 5000 and 2900 respectively. Cambodia was the only country where the total
number
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of
elephants
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increased to 1700
while
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Vietnam, Myanmar, Laos, Thailand and China vary between 500 to just over 1000
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Vocabulary: Replace the words elephants, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuated
  • decline
  • increase
  • drop
  • steady decrease
  • recover
  • habitat loss
  • poaching
  • efforts
  • protect
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