The graph below shows the average closing prices of selected precious metals from 2013 to 2021. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average closing prices of selected precious metals from 2013 to 2021. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The previous line graph illustrates the
cost
in
dollars
per oz. of
gold
, platinum and
palladium
over time from 2013 to 2021.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that
gold
and
palladium
exhibited a clear increase,
although
palladium
revealed the highest growth.
In contrast
,
although
platinum started the trend with the highest
cost
, it recorded a certain fall across the years, displaying the lowest
cost
in the
last
year
. In detail, in the
year
2013
gold
and
palladium
began with a price of just below 1500
dollars
and around 750
dollars
, respectively.
Although
both prices demonstrated some fluctuation across the years,
at the end
of the period (2021)
palladium
had a dramatic increase of just below 2500
dollars
followed by
gold
with around 1750
dollars
per oz.
In contrast
, even though platinum showcased the highest
cost
at the
begining
Correct your spelling
beginning
of the period in the
year
2013, it faced a significant decline with just over 1000
dollars
per oz in its
cost
in the
year
2021.
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