The graph below shows the average closing prices of selected precious metals from 2013 to 2021. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The previous line graph illustrates the
cost
in dollars
per oz. of gold
, platinum and palladium
over time from 2013 to 2021.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that gold
and palladium
exhibited a clear increase, although
palladium
revealed the highest growth. In contrast
, although
platinum started the trend with the highest cost
, it recorded a certain fall across the years, displaying the lowest cost
in the last
year
.
In detail, in the year
2013 gold
and palladium
began with a price of just below 1500 dollars
and around 750 dollars
, respectively. Although
both prices demonstrated some fluctuation across the years, at the end
of the period (2021) palladium
had a dramatic increase of just below 2500 dollars
followed by gold
with around 1750 dollars
per oz.
In contrast
, even though platinum showcased the highest cost
at the begining
of the period in the Correct your spelling
beginning
year
2013, it faced a significant decline with just over 1000 dollars
per oz in its cost
in the year
2021.Submitted by nila.hiperu on
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