The diagram below shows the life cycle of the butterfly.

The diagram below shows the life cycle of the butterfly.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the life cycle of the butterfly.
The picture displays the butterfly's life cycle.
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, it takes less than a year to complete the life cycle of the butterfly. It is
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clear that there are four distinct stages: the egg, the larva caterpillar, the pupa and the adult. The female
buttefly
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butterfly
lays eggs on the leaf of the milkwood tree, which is later to become the main source of the larva caterpillar food. It takes around 5 days for the
carterpillar
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caterpillar
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to emerge, and its main task is to feed on the milkwood leaves. After 3 weeks, as it moults
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6 times, its size increases
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to what it
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when it first
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out of the egg.
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, the caterpillar goes to the next stage
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known as the pupa. It stays still until the young butterfly comes out of the pupa. The adult butterfly can live up to a few weeks, and it is the time for mating and reproducing.

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